J.B. Manas’s DRAGON ISLAND begins with immediate action: the destruction of a small village by something that appears in grainy cellphone footage like a flying reptile. When paleontologist Vikki Barnes receives a call from her father, the last thing she expects is to be asked to go to the island to determine what the creature may have been. Even better, she finds out that her ex-boyfriend Matt will be accompanying her. When they arrive on the island, Vikki soon realizes that uncovering the truth will be much more dangerous than she ever imagined.
From page one, readers are drawn into a fast-paced and action-filled plot. The adventure continues at a steady speed, creating a reading experience that’s as riveting as watching an action film. Additionally, Manas excels at creating a vibrant and immersive setting. From the persistent mosquitoes to the oppressive humidity, the island comes to life on every page and creates a captivating backdrop for the plot.
There are several points of view utilized throughout the book. Vikki is a paleontologist who is more comfortable in a museum than in the field, and her side of the story is the most prominent. A few chapters are told from her father’s perspective, too. As the one who initiated the field visit, he provides relevant behind-the-scenes information that supports the primary story. Vikki’s ex-boyfriend Matt has several chapters as well. While the characters are strong enough to support the plot, they could benefit from more depth. Much of their characterization is surface level, leaving them feeling slightly flat.
Information ranging from world building to relevant scientific discussions are incorporated throughout the exposition and dialogue. Manas’s ability to include detailed scientific information while maintaining the pace of the plot and the intensity of the action is impressive. Scientific details are presented in an easily digestible way, and it’s readily apparent how much effort the author put into this aspect of the novel.
The writing could benefit from a little polishing, though. There are several small errors scattered throughout the book, mostly relating to grammar and punctuation. In addition, sometimes readers are told (rather than shown) what characters are feeling. As a result, the characters don’t have as much depth as they could.
Nevertheless, the nonstop action and high body count will keep lovers of this genre turning the pages and wondering what secrets their government might be keeping from them.
J.B. Manas’s DRAGON ISLAND is an action-packed adventure with an engaging plot and page-turning thrills, but it would benefit from a little more editing and character development.
~ A Mac for IndieReader